Common Virus Blamed for 5 Infant Deaths, CDC SaysBetter laboratory tests reveal a common illness can be deadly to newborns
Really? This is the first time an infection has ever been fatal??? Erm, Mike, you, my friend, need an editor, proofreader, friend, something! The name of the virus finally shows up at the end of the last sentence in the first full paragraph. What's up with that? Why couldn't we have done something like "This marks the first time Coxsackievirus B1 has been found to be fatal."??? Maybe I'm just irritated because the primary piece of information I wanted from the story was what the virus was. Somehow I don't feel like I'm alone on that though. Hmph.
And now back to the lab work previously in progress.
And now back to the lab work previously in progress.
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